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Discussion in 'Creative Writing, Graphics, Movies, etc.' started by Zarash, Jul 26, 2008.

  1. Zarash
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    Which one do you guys think is better and any suggestions. For SotM
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    #2 Im going to touch this one up a bit if you guys think its better I just changed it really quickly

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  2. The Communist
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    The 2nd one is much better IMO.
     
  3. Reignier
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    i agree with commi
     
  4. Zarash
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    Do think I should get rid of the purple outline around the word joker or not?
     
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    I like the first tbh, the second has too much color conflict
     
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    first one is hard to read because its too light of a purple color.

    Second one is pretty good. I like how the purple accentuates the red
     
  7. Yizelin
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    put me down for this vote :p