A Witch Named Ruth (A Limerick)

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  1. Secksy
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    A friend of mine, for her final, needed to draw ten images to ten different pieces of literature and asked me to contribute. Here is what I came up with. The intention was to write a limerick... but it didn't turn out very funny. Oh well. I stand by it.

    There once was a witch named Ruth,
    Who was always a tad uncouth.
    With a wand in her hand,
    She scoured the land,
    Searching for eternal youth.

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    EDIT: I CAME UP WITH A LULZ VERSION

    There once was a witch named Ruth,
    Who was always a tad uncouth.
    While starting some trouble,
    She stepped in a puddle,
    Causing her to go 'poof'.​
     
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    I actually really like that man.
     
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    I liked it.
     
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    I liked both. But the second one moreso C:
     
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    Yeah that wasn't to bad for limerick.