Metro 2033 Review

Discussion in 'Creative Writing, Graphics, Movies, etc.' started by Gilgamesh, Apr 3, 2010.

  1. Gilgamesh
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    The reviews seem too brief and not very well written (though this may be because of how brief they are). They give a very basic sense of the game but don't really give me a feeling of "Hmm I should probably get this" or "no way in hell".

    Maybe adding in more info on game play features or how they are similar to other games, how long the single player campaign is, etc... The reviews also feel like they weren't really read over before being posted. Not a very good flow and the grammar seems a bit off. I've never been a grammar nazi, and don't even have the knowledge, but it just doesn't feel right when reading through the reviews.

    I'm not trying to be a dick or anything just saying I wouldn't bookmark the site for a review if I didn't know you. Just trying to help out and post constructive feedback.

    EDIT: The gameplay and trailer links don't work either.
     
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    Yea i forgot to add that video WIll do it in a couple minutes. Sokar would you be interesting in being a writer? =P
     
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    I would but I don't seem to have much time as of late to play games. That and as I said above I don't think I would be a very good writer. It all depends on how often you would want a game reviewed too.
     
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    As Brief and Accurate as possible. Thats about it.
     
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    Sorry about missing the private chats tonight. They happened right when the fuck mook spammed vent. After that I was just raging in the bc2 channels.

    I'd be willing to help out on some reviews. Just don't ask how I got a copy of the game =P
     
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    haha what game will you be reviewing? I can add you as an editor on the blog .
     
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    TERA foo!
     
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    I can't get a "trial" of Tera =P
     
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    if u didnt sign up for the beta, u can use my account while im at work to get a good glimpse.
     
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    What about meeeee? :[
     
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    Dude I signed up and I didnt get accepted. Share account plox Xamiazi thanks